Saturday

Inspiration


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Words not said
No need
She felt his happiness
he sensed her pain

Just a glance
No more
She saw his anguish
he witnessed her joy

Two minds joined
As one
He was her soul mate
she his inspiration




22 comments:

Mary N. said...

This is beautiful and striking. I read a lot of the poems from the prompt. Many came at it from a very pessimistic angle. You said a lot in few words. I really enjoyed it. I guess b thought mine was unrealistic, the funny thing is...it was true. I write my poetry from real life:)

Jeques said...

A perfect match

A meant to be

Perfect pair

Like spoon and fork,

Scissors,

Pants

Slippers

One is useless without the other -

Two hearts become one.

To find that one person to make you whole, is heaven on earth.

I wish you well.

~ Jeques

Mystic Thistle said...

Its beautiful.

Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!

Jyotika said...

lovely.....each word holds deep meaning..both individually n wen read together....too little to read n too much to understnd....loved it...

Short Poems said...

Nice stuff here Keith,Great little poem :)

Marinela

Deeptesh said...

Simple yet profound. Lovely. How have u been?Plz drop by my blog again. Miss ur cmnts.

www.deepteshpoetry.blogspot.com

Deborah said...

Beautiful...

Anonymous said...

fabulously put.

soul mate, inspirations, they are one, divine!

Dave King said...

A very fine web site indeed. I am much impressed.

indiwriter said...

Lovely..yin and yang. And a very beautiful header photo.

You might like to read this one of mine on the same theme:
Tango

cheers!

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

So very beautiful Keith. God bless.

alka narula said...

very beautiful

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Mary said...

Sounds like a great relationship. All should be so fortunate!

Unspoken said...

MmmmHmmm :). Beauty of people in love.

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful. Not a word wasted. So wonderfully done.

Anonymous said...

Magnificent =)

T. Powell Coltrin said...

One word: beautiful!

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Unknown said...

My Whirl is called Shhh...!

csknotts said...

Simple yet beautiful.