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Words not said
No need
She felt his happiness
No need
She felt his happiness
he sensed her pain
Just a glance
No more
She saw his anguish
he witnessed her joy
Two minds joined
As one
He was her soul mate
she his inspiration
22 comments:
This is beautiful and striking. I read a lot of the poems from the prompt. Many came at it from a very pessimistic angle. You said a lot in few words. I really enjoyed it. I guess b thought mine was unrealistic, the funny thing is...it was true. I write my poetry from real life:)
A perfect match
A meant to be
Perfect pair
Like spoon and fork,
Scissors,
Pants
Slippers
One is useless without the other -
Two hearts become one.
To find that one person to make you whole, is heaven on earth.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
Its beautiful.
Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!
lovely.....each word holds deep meaning..both individually n wen read together....too little to read n too much to understnd....loved it...
Nice stuff here Keith,Great little poem :)
Marinela
Simple yet profound. Lovely. How have u been?Plz drop by my blog again. Miss ur cmnts.
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Beautiful...
fabulously put.
soul mate, inspirations, they are one, divine!
A very fine web site indeed. I am much impressed.
Lovely..yin and yang. And a very beautiful header photo.
You might like to read this one of mine on the same theme:
Tango
cheers!
So very beautiful Keith. God bless.
very beautiful
Sounds like a great relationship. All should be so fortunate!
MmmmHmmm :). Beauty of people in love.
This is beautiful. Not a word wasted. So wonderfully done.
Magnificent =)
One word: beautiful!
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Simple yet beautiful.
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