Two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl,
year after a year.
Swimming in opposite directions,
year after year.
By night he worked, she slept.
By day she worked he slept.
Round and round, passing each other twice a day,
year after year
Two people, two lives.
Two different lives, growing apart
*One lost soul, swimming in a fish bowl,
Round and round.
Year after year.
Round and round.
Year after year.
6 comments:
i see you attempted...i could not write anything using "two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl..." because i COULDN'T get Pink Floyd's song out of my head!!!! My all-time favorite and so the muses sat this one out...
i did, however, liked yours....bravo!
I liked this one immensely!
Sad and even sadder...so often this is how two people end up living.
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Sad and even sadder...so often this is how two people end up living.
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
Great work.
simple words explained it with depth
beautiful
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