I look from afar
unattainable
unavailable
inaccessible
I look in awe
amazement
wonderment
admiration
I imagine
envisage
make believe
fantasize
I wish
yearn
long
crave
I desire
I desire
I desire
I desire
unattainable
unavailable
inaccessible
I look in awe
amazement
wonderment
admiration
I imagine
envisage
make believe
fantasize
I wish
yearn
long
crave
I desire
I desire
I desire
I desire
29 comments:
Oh, nice place! Everybody has such beautiful sites! (I can't even make a link yet. But soon....
Good work with the prompt!
Desire, desire, desire;
Ah, why must we want what we don't have?
Made me want food more; I'm hungry.
I hear ya!! Think you nailed it! Well done! So true!!
Hugs Giggles
wow that captured it excellently. Loved it Keith
Now that's enough to make you desire more.
and you say you can't write poetry?
Good work, this!
Housing my soul
desier... nothing like it... gotta get me some more of that one of these days.....
I feel that yearning too. I just love this one. I also enjoy the background photo on this blog; hadn't seen this page of yours before.
...and then we die. :-)
wonderful rhythm
beautiful as always!!! :)
This is wonderfully written. I desire desire desire too. Great read.
Ah yes, desire...we all have it in one way or another as you have proven. Very well done, Keith...how true your poem!
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You're a talent ... poetry, kids stories, always marvellous, hearty congrats Keith ;)
I want, I want! I hope all your desires come true...
Hi Keith! This is fantastic. I read it out loud and could totally imagine it being recited on stage in some incredible play. It has such a beautifully powerful energy.
:)
Oh I desire too! You say it so well...though!
After reading this I'm gonna give writing up!
Ya put me to shame!
"Big Sigh!"
I just love the way you ended this piece, brilliant
beautiful...everything and more... thank you, it's monday and i feel better already...
Outstanding, every word so true, so meaningful...you could make me give up poetry.
Awesome! Perfect! The yearning spirals and spirals...awesome!
i can really feel the emotion behind the one word descriptions. they are powerful words describing powerful feelings
Ooh, lovely! I like the repetition at the end of the poem; it drives home the emotion.
The photo in the background is so enchanting I could hardly get to the words. I think I'm having a really visual day as I'm having that reaction a lot. But the repetition works too.
Love it
Love it
Love it
Love it!
I can feel the depth of the desire.. yearning... longing...
I can feel it...
good job!
keep it rollin :)
Hi Keith, I like how it progesses through different feelings and ends with that quadruple statement. Powerful!
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